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[ooc] HOW'S MY DANMAKU? (Concrit Post)
headstrong maiden ↕ invincible youkai
danmakuboundary
Like what I'm doing? Don't like what I'm doing?

Explain why here! Remember, as this is a constructive criticism post, I want criticism I can use, not just aimless praise or flaming.

A NOTE: I am aware that Yukari is a little... 'forceful' with her actions and might seem a little overly aware of the world around her. If you feel I'm going a little too strong on that, feel free to let me know, but be aware that it's somewhat consistent with the canon and I can't cut it down TOO much. After all, Gensokyo is filled with a bunch of cheating jerks.
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